Should you stumble across this website and have any reaction to what you read, please share your response with me. Constructive criticism is always welcome. And if there’s something you’d do differently, let me know.
Should you stumble across this website and have any reaction to what you read, please share your response with me. Constructive criticism is always welcome. And if there’s something you’d do differently, let me know.
The Yankee Poet 
I stumbled across Autumn’s Pretense in your box on S. Washington St. I am a retired lawyer who spent his life writing legal documents. In my retirement I was determined to develop an appreciation for poetry, but have not been successful until I found your poem. Your description of leaves without using the noun was spot on. But then for the word to appear as a verb in the last line was magical. Thank you. I have signed on for more and look forward to more. And I will share your website with friends who are farther along in there appreciation of your art form.
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Thank you very much for your kind words. They caught me by surprise. I didn’t think anyone would actually like my poetry, but was hoping they might be willing to tell me what they didn’t like about it, so I could work on improving. I’m grateful you enjoyed Autumn’s Pretense, and hope you won’t shy away from telling me what you do and do not like in the future.
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